Dunedin coastline

 

By David Emery

By Sep 14/2008

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Nice clean image. Simplicity itself. The dark lines at the top keep your eye in the photo as does to bottom. The extra weight at the bottom is nice and the birds stand out well against the lighter ripples.
    Suggestions:
    Only to find out how it would look zoomed in a bit further.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    A lovely image; you've captured a feeling of serenity. An interesting interpretation of the theme - I can definitely see the lines in the water. Beautiful blue tones; nice use of silhouette.
    Suggestions:
    While I can see the lines, the story in this image - to me - is not lines. Rather, it is about the birds, or the sense of peace. Perhaps, if the format was a wider horizontal, the "line" message would be stronger. Or, the water shot without the birds. That wouldn't make it a stronger image, but would make the message more about lines.