Waiting for the crowd

 

By Lou Misshula

By Sep 27/2008

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    This IS lines, very straight lines with a repeating pattern. The support brackets and the diagonal shadow at the top provide a welcome break from what could be monotonous repitition. This is a creative view with a minimalistic interpretation of the subject.
    Suggestions:
    Perhaps take a bit off the left to remove the bare concrete wall, but not so much as to remove the shadowed boundary.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    The image is quite mesmerizing - once you look at it, it is hard to look away. Dark shadows on the left lead eye to the light. Good depth of field.
    Suggestions:
    I like it as is but wonder if just one spectator would make a stronger image.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Good title; a good interpretation of the the theme.
    Suggestions:
    Nowhere for the eye to land; Add something on the benches for a spark of colour.