Roof Line

 

By O\'Brien, Laurie

By Sep 29/2008

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    The soft pastel tones are what attract me to this photo; even the shadow in the window is subdued. And of course, there are lines everywhere, perfectly capturing the theme.
    Suggestions:
    Perhaps have a little more of the roof showing (cause I have to write something in here).
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    The constrast between the pink (rose?) colour of the house and the blue of the sky is interesting. The colour scheme almost has a surreal feeling for me personally. The man-made lines constrast with the fluid texture of the sky/clouds, indeed the man-made object in the frame only has straight lines. Exposure on the clouds is well handled, with no overly blown out highlights.
    Suggestions:
    I'm a little distracted by the roof panel lines in the upper right. But if you crop them, you lose the nice corner of the eaves. If you can revisit this situation, try a composition where the darker rose eaves line is right along the border of the frame.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    I love the pink / blue palette. The point of view putting that interesting sky behing the building works great.
    Suggestions:
    Not much. I love this image. Maybe a touch more contrast to give it some pop.