als bridge

 

By van Straubenzee, Tony

By Sep 29/2008

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Strong interpretation of the theme. Love the dramatic angle; nice exposure of the brilliant sky.
    Suggestions:
    I find the tree a bit unsatisfying; the position is certainly balanced, but it doesn't provide the visual weight. Maybe if the yellows in the tree were a bit more saturated / luminous.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    The image is sharp, the lines of the bridge stand out against the white clouds.The green tree is nicely placed in the image.
    Suggestions:
    If it was possible to move more to the right , the black of the underside of the bridge might not have been so prominent.