All Together--Push

 

By Joan Greaves

By Mar 07/2010

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    I love the colors and action!!!
    Suggestions:
    I wish all of the kids weren't cut off (legs etc.)
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    Great fun; lots of energy; great primary palette that suits the kids.
    Suggestions:
    Maybe close the aperature a touch to put all the kids in sharp focus.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Primary colours - wow! The activity is well described and there is a certain intensity of concentraiton there. Fun shot.
    Suggestions:
    I thought about the cut off people... maybe just a little more of the kid on the right (the yellow arm) might have added something, but it works as is.