Pasta anyone?

 

By Brenda F

By Apr 13/2013

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    The arrangement of the tomatoes forms an x and makes a central pont of focus for the viewer. The colour is well saturated and natural.
    Suggestions:
    Eliminate the black hole below the centre by rearranging some of the tomatoes. Making the triangle of tomatoes in the centre all in focus rather than one tomato off to the left side would be more effective.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    This image immediately says "tomatoes" and when you want to reach out and touch something because they look fresh, that means that they have been well captured.
    Suggestions:
    It's always a challenge with subjects like this, to decide what you want to say. In this case, depth of field is shallow, so emphasis is on just a few tomatoes. That asks the viewer to really only look at a few of what are really the same thing. That leads me to ask why.