On the Spit

 

By Glenn M

By Aug 11/2013

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Great photo. It all works; thirds, s-curve, lighting, mist, camera guy. Excellent
    Suggestions:
    The are only two small things I might try, not saying they would improve it any. - a bit of vignetting to focus the eye. - maybe a bit more sharpness, especially to the foreground
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    Lovely mood to this, gorgeous light and a wonderful mix overall of softness and clarity. The curve is perfectly placed and truly draws the viewer in.
    Suggestions:
    None. One of my faves for this theme!
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Every photographer in Burnaby probably has a shot like this! ;-) the curving lines of the boardwalk lead the eye through the image and (nicely) comes to rest on the person at the end of the pier.
    Suggestions:
    I don't really see any changes I would make in this case. nicely done.
    Response:
    Thanks, I think... Add me the list of photographers...
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    Lovely morning light; nice tones; nice capture of the mist; good to have the photographer at the end of the "s" as a reward for the eye. Good interpretation of the theme.
    Suggestions:
    If you could find a higher vantage point, looking down a touch on the pier, it would enhance the "s" feel of the image. Of course that would mean bringing something to the spot (ladder, a friend's back, high heels... )
  5. Comment
    Strengths:
    Strong image, with a storytelling component. I love that the s curve draws my eye to the photographer.
    Suggestions:
    None. Good lighting, exposure, and composition.