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By Ziggy J

By Nov 13/2013

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Not a bunch .....................
    Suggestions:
    Don't really see much movement here.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    This picture is in twice.
    Suggestions:
    This picture is in twice.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    The overall composition is strong, I think. I also like the fact that you can see the sailor in the photo. Without hime/her the viewer wouldn't be able to tell the size of the boat (it's huge!).
    Suggestions:
    To fit more with the theme of "sense of movement," I suggest slowing down the shutter speed so that you get a bit of motion blur.
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    Harmonious colours and the splash of blue on the sails are a pleasant mix. The elements are all very carefully placed compositionally. The change in format from the other, very similar image, gives the sails a little more room.
    Suggestions:
    The waves suggest less than a placid sea, but the soft colours, distant view and precise positioning suggest tranquility to me. A vertical format might create a bit more tension, i.e. moving items don't always have to have "room to move into". If the viewer feels a little discomfort, perhaps that would create some tension that is more appropriate to the state of the seas.