Flight

 

By Shona L

By Nov 14/2013

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Definite movement. Cropping is ok.
    Suggestions:
    Photo is too over processed..
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    Strong spectrum of colour bands, and the little bird in flight... that looks like a struggle. Great creation here.
    Suggestions:
    No suggestions to improve the image.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    I love the colours of this image. Your choice of tweaking the image has created some movement in the hills as well as the movement of the bird placed perfectly on the two thirds line. I really like this image.
    Suggestions:
    None that I can think of.
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    A nice, peaceful image. I don't really get a sense of motion from the bird itself, but I do from the wavelike background. Because of that, I find this photo almost mesmerizing. Well done.
    Suggestions:
    There's a bit of noise around the bird that I'd like to see cloned out.
  5. Comment
    Strengths:
    You've turned up your saturation to focus the eye on the bird. I do sense the movement here both of the bird and in the flowing lines.
    Suggestions:
    I'm not sure if the bird is supposed to be the focus. if so I think it should be bigger and a main part of the picture. I find the blues to be distracting. Also there is a big white empty corner of at the top left.