silver city

 

By Ziggy J

By Nov 22/2013

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Maybe the cropping.........
    Suggestions:
    Ship is out of focus and is very distracting to the image. There seems to a dark dirty spot in the sky just to the right of the ship?
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    This is kind of a classic BC look with the grey clouds, the mountains, the water and one of our iconic ferries.
    Suggestions:
    Not sure about strong linkage to the theme, I guess the ferry is moving if it is out in the straight.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Good placement of the ferry showing movement by intention. I like the almost monochromatic look of the shot which makes it very moody. You have captured both the highlights on the water and some definition in the clouds.
    Suggestions:
    I think since this was taken through the ferry window that there is some kind of smudge in the middle of the photo which may or may not be taken out with software.
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    Kind of a nice, broody mood established here. I love the reflection of the light on the water.
    Suggestions:
    I don't get the sense of motion here. I think you would need to slow down the shutter speed substantially.
  5. Comment
    Strengths:
    This is a nice, tranquil image with the horizon chosen to show off the lovely sky, and the vessel placed in a compositionally appropriate spot.
    Suggestions:
    Digital noise could be treated; there is a bit of a dark swoosh in the centre sky (reflection?). Sense of movement isn't a strong theme in the photograph.
  6. Comment
    Strengths:
    A lovely seascape and certainly the location is recognizable. I like the blues, the faded mountains, the dazzling water and the black silhouette against all the these tones. You've used the horizontal thirds lines well both in the sky and for the subject.
    Suggestions:
    I'm not sure this works for this theme as I don't get a sense of movement from this picture.