Fogrise

 

By Derek Carlin

By Feb 21/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Wonderful gradient tones; A strong sense being in the fog; great soft silhouettes and the light shadows are wonderful.
    Suggestions:
    The small bright area is strong enough to balance a large darker area. Experiment with a different crop - taking a bit off the right - for different balance.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    Beautiful warn colour tone to the photograph.
    Suggestions:
    The right of the photograph has a fair amount of dark tones. Have you considered if a square crop would accomplish the same feeling?
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    What a moment. The bright yellow and the fog effect really creates a mood.
    Suggestions:
    I cannot see detail in the bottom so would suggest cropping off some of it, and also, if you crop on the right to the edge of the light, you focus the viewer on the main action and keep them there.