Waiting at the Umbrella Shop

 

By Karen J

By Oct 01/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    The bold three colours on a black and white image creates an immediate focal point.
    Suggestions:
    Matter of timing, waiting a few seconds could mean the person on the right would be out of the shot, not walking out of the shot. The woman is the other conflict, as she is looking left out of the shot.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    An interesting interpretation of the theme; a good street slice of life; good juxtaposition between the girl sitting and the figure in motion; converting to monochrome simplifies the image and lets the eye focus on the subject more easily....Nancy
    Suggestions:
    The selective saturation is fun and lends pop to the image, but it appears to have been applies unevenly. There are grey patches on the pink and yellow umbrellas which somewhat take away from the impact of the technique. Consider zooming in to 1 to 1 when applying the effect to make sure of accurate edges.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    A fun photo. I like the overall composition.
    Suggestions:
    I would prefer either all black and white or all colour.