The Climb

 

By Glenn M

By Oct 03/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    About as close to perfect a photo as there is. Excellent composition. Love the curving leading line the kids make. The eye starts at the bottom left and travels right up to the top kid, at which point it wants to read the engraved words. This is just great. ........... Bruce
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    My favorite shot, the line of children, the soft, unobtrusive background, just a great capture.
    Suggestions:
    I have no real suggestions for you, your composition is very nice. Perhaps you could take the kids to other areas and get a few more carefree shots.
    Response:
    Not my kids to take to another location....
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Nicely captured....great flowing movement of the kids contrasting with the solid building/monument.
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    The children curving up the base of the statue makes a great fun subject. Nice exposure.
    Suggestions:
    I am distracted by the elephants feet which seem to have no impact on the image. I would crop the top down below the feet and slightly from the left to bring tighter focus on the children
  5. Comment
    Strengths:
    Great capture, good composition. Pretty difficult to take pictures of running kids, but you did it perfect
    Suggestions:
    No any suggestion for improvement of the image. Well done.
  6. Comment
    Strengths:
    Interesting capture, I like the way the kids are climbing up one behind the other.
    Suggestions:
    Maybe a tighter crop? The skin seems overly red to me.
  7. Comment
    Strengths:
    One of my favourites. Great interpretation of the theme. The title is very appropriate. The eye follows the procession of the children climbing up the steps of the statue with teach child at different stages of the climb. Photo nicely composed; children are a bit off centre and there is space on the right for the children to walk into.
    Suggestions:
    Children look a tad soft in my opinion indicating perhaps the shutter speed is a bit slow.