Intense Texting

 

By Peter_J E

By Oct 16/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    A good fit for the theme, given the ubiquitous subject. Good tonal contrasts. The uncluttered environment helps make the subject stand out.
    Suggestions:
    The slightly high-angle shot precludes much facial involvement of the subject as he looks down.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    I love this for its simplicity. Also, your treatment of the photo brings out the shadows and textures nicely.
    Suggestions:
    Nothing to suggest.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    You have captured a part of social life now... texting.
    Suggestions:
    Some context of where the person is would help to have the photograph communicate a message. For example, if this is a walkway surrounded by traffic it would be a different message than a sole person texting.
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    A very detailed and textured candid portrait; Good point of view; placing the subject in an empty space and using the blurring and lightening at the edges work to keep him very isolated, which is a story in itself. The high contrast monochrome supports that sense of isolation, and is very elegant. ... Nancy
    Suggestions:
    No suggestions. Sorry.