windsurfer

 

By Ziggy J

By Oct 17/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    There are some nice elements to this shot - the layering of the sea, mountains and sky and their textures and colours therein.
    Suggestions:
    This could benefit by a straightened horizon and a bit tighter framing on the subject, with an inclusion of his face if possible. An "action sports" theme is more prominent than "slice of life".
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    Powerful shot, you have captured the surfer/sailor and the mountains in a single scene.
    Suggestions:
    The horizon line between the water and the trees seems to drop a bit on the left, but I found my eye darting between the power of the mountains and the the bold colour of the surfer. So there was a conflict in terms of subject as to where you wanted the viewer to look.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Good action shot. Nice contrast between the snowy mountains and the watersport.
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    Fun and energetic moment; The slice of colour draws attention to the subject; the fresh snow on the mountains makes a great backdrop ... Nancy
    Suggestions:
    The slightly tilted horizon is distracting. Consider either leveling the horizon or making the tilt more dramatic to emphasize the energy of the moment.