Dog Walk

 

By Warren B

By Oct 21/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Great sense of movement and what seems intense focus on what lies ahead. Like that there is open space to the left.
    Suggestions:
    Suggest that the shadows be lightened up. It takes a moment to see the dog as he/she blends into the background
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    You caught the action of walking nicely with one person's foot lifted from the ground. The background is simple enough that it provides a framework and does not make the image appear to be busy.
    Suggestions:
    Try to bring out some of the shadows so that the dog more early stands apart in the scene.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Strong composition with nice textures and long deep shadows. Nicely exposed.
    Suggestions:
    I wish the dog wasn't lost in the shadow.
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    A nice quiet, everyday moment, perfect for the theme; interestingly textured background; well planned for the light to fall on the faces of the subjects. Nice work ... Nancy
    Suggestions:
    The dark dog disappears against the shadow (except for his legs. Consider some selective dodging to accentuate his outlines and muscles, making him stand out more.