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By Glenn M

By Nov 01/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Great timing to capture this special moment.
    Suggestions:
    The subjects' faces are a bit dark and could use some dodging. There is also an unfortunate merger with the woman sitting in the background.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    You have caught a very sweet moment. Images are always stronger when there is a story, as you have caught here.
    Suggestions:
    Really too bad about that person in the back. If you lack the patience to painstakingly clone her(?) out, try a little burning in to blend a bit more with the background?
    Response:
    Yes, I used this photo in a Photobook I just put together and after a few tries is was relatively easy. By accident I uploaded the wrong photo for the Themes event and there is no way to correct a problem, like not typing in the title or clicking on the wrong image!
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Very nice image. Here is a story- two generation are working nicely together.Good composition with foreground ,middle ground and background. Good clarity of central objects. Very good submission for the theme.
    Suggestions:
    Maybe have to pay attention to a dept of field next time
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    A charming moment of interaction between generations; Wonderful interpretation of the theme; lots of story here ... Nancy
    Suggestions:
    The brightness at the bottom of the image overwhelms the rest of the image in shadow. Two options: 1) Crop the bright bottom of the image off altogether; you are left with a more intimate image with more even exposure; or / and 2) apply some selective brightening to the faces and hands of the subjects to make them stand out more. This will strengthen the story.