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By Garfield J

By Nov 15/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Conveys the message of friendship.
    Suggestions:
    No suggestions to offer.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    Beautifully captured shot of two beautiful happy women. Nicely exposed with a tight focus.
    Suggestions:
    The woman on the right seems to have a broomstick sticking up behind her which could have been cloned out.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    A charming capture of a very warm moment; the image suggests deep connection between the figures, and with the photographer. At least, great comfort with the photographer. Nice exposure of the two different skin tones; Simple background doesn't distract from the subjects. Nicely done ... Nancy
    Suggestions:
    Not so much a suggestion for improvement, rather an alternate crop. When the image is cropped into the the shoulders of both women, it looks very intimate.