On the Move

 

By Shona L

By Nov 15/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    The soft blur of the young person nicely communicate the feeling of movement. Nicely done.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    Some nice colours and lines here.
    Suggestions:
    I wish there was less blur, especially with regard to the stationary objects.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    The slightly long exposure giving a sense of movement; the capture just as the subject is going around the corner; makes an interesting image with some tension and a story. It works well... Nancy
    Suggestions:
    The sense of movement of the figure would be stronger if the rest of the image were sharp; consider a technique to hold the camera a bit steadier for the shot.