Life's a Beach

 

By Tim S

By Nov 20/2016

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:
    Strong composition in terms of a leading entry into the scene... the two rocks and the passway. There we see the subject. The single person on the beach. The overcast prevents any of the details in the background from cluttering the scene,.
    Suggestions:
    The one branch in the upper left could be cloned out as it is a visual distraction pulling the eye away from the subject.
  2. Comment
    Strengths:
    This is a very moody shot. The figure is well framed and there is good detail in the rocks and water, but not so much to be the main draw. It tells a bit of a story, always a good thing.
  3. Comment
    Strengths:
    Absolutely great image.Wonderful composition wit all three elements- foreground, middle ground & background. Very good idea to use rocks as a frame & also convert the image in B&W.
    Here is story. The fog creates a special mood
    Suggestions:
    I believe the image doesn't need any improvement
  4. Comment
    Strengths:
    Shows good patience or good staging to get the figure into just the right spot to be frames by the rocks; beautiful crisp rock textures contrast well with the quiet, misty background; A nice story of a solitary beach walk, it feels peaceful or maybe sad depending on your mood. Lovely ... Nancy
    Suggestions:
    Not so much an improvement, as an alternative. It makes a very nice square, which has a slightly different emotional feel.
  5. Comment
    Strengths:
    Strong sense of mood here.
    Suggestions:
    I would like to see either a bit more or none of that branch at the top. Either would work, I think.