Concentric Circles

 

By Geoffrey G

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    The circles are lovely and perfect for the theme.  There are some lovely reflections also.

    Suggestions:

    I find the circles are somewhat overwhelmed by the plant life,  refletions and sticks.  There is a lot happening in this image.  Great idea and the pond is beautiful, but for the theme, a simpler piece of water might have expressed the message more clearly. 

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    A subtle approach to the theme and I enjoy the delicacy of the circles / rings in the water. Lovely light and reflections. 

    Suggestions:

    Could you try cropping almost a third off of the left side? That sections feels somewhat distracting and isn't contributing to the shapes element of the overall composition. Sure, then it becomes a portrait orientation, but that's okay....

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    An organic interpretation of the theme!  Unique and effective.  The concentric circles are definitely draw the eye and the attention...  Nancy

    Suggestions:

    Perhaps a slightly tighter crop from the left and bottom to really put the attention on the two "main" circles would strengthen the image for the theme.