Red Chimney

 

By Harry T

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Wonderful sense of drama with the bright church building against that interesting sky.  nice control of the light on the building.

    Suggestions:

    Something is a bit off about the verticals of the building.  Consider revisiting some perspective correction.

    Response:

    Thank you for your constructive comment. Good observation about the verticals. I will try some re-editing.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    The church building has excellent exposure. The unique shape of the building against the big sky has a nice dramatic feel. The landscape has a nice feel to it.

    Suggestions:

    The dark grainy sky doesn't work for me even though it does pop the silver on the tower it has a surreal effect which might be your intention. 

    Response:

    Thanks very much for your comment and critique. I wasn't trying for a surreal effect but I did like the dramatic lighting, ie, subject in sunshine but with dark dramatic clouds in the sky at the same time; something that's quite common on the prairies.