Sheltered from the Storm

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By Nancy M

By Nov 29/2017

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Nice capture

    Suggestions:

    I would have gone the other way on the crop. less foreground and mor above space, more rain.  Thank you!!

    Response:

    Agreed, and thanks.  However, just above was a completely distracting muddle of ugly stuff.  So, stuck with a bit of crowding overhead.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    Despite the title, it's actually hard to tell whether they are sheltered or not.  Fantastic colour against the dark background, and catching some of that colour in the foreground is lovely.  Good message.  I think the amount of space around the figures is good.  I tend to overcrop so that was my first suggestion, but I think it works very well giving them some space to emphasize their isolation.

    Response:

    Thanks!  I tend to crop a lot too, but for this theme, I wanted to leave lots of rain. I'm glad it worked for you.

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    Nice composition. I'm drawn to look at the mother looking at her child. I like the rain bouncing.

  4. Comment
    Strengths:

    Well done. The image fits the theme perfectly.

    One can see lines of heavy rain. Bright spots add to the image

    Suggestions:

    No any suggestion