Blustery

4.2 / 9
 

By Susan M

By Nov 29/2017

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Great misty day.

    Suggestions:

    Busy - my eye wanders around the image.  Could try leaving the trolley wires out of the picture.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    Aside from the cone stuck in the wires, I don't see strong evidence of "blustery", yet it "feels" like it.  All the lines create their own composition, giving us a view we don't normally bother to look at.

    Suggestions:

    I think the vignette is unnecessary.  There is no real reason to emphasize the centre over the corners.

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    A very "local" interpretation of the theme.  I can feel that weather.

    Suggestions:

    This is an illustration of how difficult it is to shoot with the wires in Vancouver.  This almost works.  If you could have shifted your POV so that the wired frames a key building the image would be stronger.