Impending Storm over the city

5.9 / 8
 

By Tim S

By Nov 30/2017

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Great view of the city.

    Suggestions:

    The clouds look a bit over processed - maybe tune them down a bit.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    The strong clouds make the city seem small, which is kind of a slight nature vs. man statement.  

    Suggestions:

    It appears to have an HDR effect applied or the clouds have been touched up; they don't quite look real although I can't put my finger on it.

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    Nice POV on this with the buildings along the far shore.

    Suggestions:

    The clouds feel a bit over processed. 

  4. Comment
    Strengths:

    The scale of the clouds looming over the city is powerful; strong interpretation of the theme. The panorama-ish shape suits the subject and the composition.

    Suggestions:

    Maybe a touch too much foreground; the empty water adds little.  Especially for this theme, cropping off some more of the bottom of the image would emphasise that dramatic sky.