Many Rays, but No Sunshine

6.1 / 7
 

By Geoffrey G

By Jan 06/2018

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Strong interpretation of the theme.  Not only are the "subject" triangles, but the eye actually moves in a triangle to view the image.  Both composition and subject are triangular.  Great work!  Nice control of exposure. Good sky.  Monochrome conversion keeps the eye on line and shape.

    Suggestions:

    The image reads a bit dark  and a bit flat on my monitor.  Perhaps a touch more white, or push the contrast a bit.  I wouldn't worry about blowing out highlights a bit unless you plan to print.  It might give the image just a touch more pop.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    The black and white gives it a broody feeling. 

    good sharpness throughout

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    A very obvious triangle composition against a nice dappled sky.

    Suggestions:

    Clone out the top two wires, add some contrast to create a more dramatic image.