Industrial

7.4 / 7
 

By Shona L

By Jan 31/2018

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Great texture and use of shadows.

    Suggestions:

    Think it would loook more balanced if it was completely vertical along the upright weld line.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    Great feeling of strength balanced by the round shape

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    Top marks for for your creative vision; most people would walk by without 'seeing' the potential for a good image here. I like the gently curved line of the shadow, which makes me think of a circus tent.

    Suggestions:

    The only thing that bothers me is the brightness on the left side, ie how the brightness on the line of the bracket almost merges with the background. However, I can appreciate the fact that this is a high contrast, reflective metal subject and as such you have handled it well.

  4. Comment
    Strengths:

    Elegant portrail of a simple industrial scene. Nice texture and the monochrome works well. Excellent use of the triangle composition.

  5. Comment
    Strengths:

    Interesting photo, I like the texure and the use of the triangle in the compostion

  6. Comment
    Strengths:

    Wonderful interpretation of the theme; love the way the trio of triangles provide backdrop and frame for the bolt.  Nice exposure; just enough contrast, but there is still interest and detail in the darks.  Wonderful textures.  Good tonal range in the B&W.  One of my faves.

    Suggestions:

    It feels tipped.  Perhaps revisit the perspective.