Corseted

 

By Debi N

By Jan 31/2020

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    An elegant subject and well balanced.

    Suggestions:

    The focus seems a little soft near the top half of the subject. Perhaps a greater depth of field would make more of it sharper.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    Very strong colour based composition with nice textural detail in the the corners. 

    Suggestions:

    A slight clockwise rotation of a few degrees might accentuate the symmetry, a key feature of this composition. 

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    Appears subtle at first, but bringing up this image on full screen really shows off the successful elements of both texture and pattern. An intriguing choice for the theme, with just right amount of cropping.

  4. Comment
    Strengths:

    This is an amazing subject, beautifully suited to the theme; clearly textures and patterns dominate the image; Good composition with strong lines leading the eye into the image.

    Suggestions:

    For the theme, this really needs to be sharply focused, if not throughout, at least more.  The lines lead our eye to that intricately textured and patterned design near the top, but we get there to find it out of focus.  Consider a much longer focal length, or even focus stacking to bring more of the image into sharp focus.