Abandoned Comfort No.1

 

By Peter_J E

By Feb 23/2020

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Strong social commentary.  Traditional composition adherents might question the placement of the abandoned items, but I think it helps tell a story suggesting there might be more beyond camera range. 

    Suggestions:

    You might consider decreasing some of the sky.  It's just not adding much except a bright distraction to the composition. 

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    Different

    Suggestions:

    The subjects are too far apart which is distracting

    The mid background is sharp and complex, another distraction.