Premature Exodus

 

By Brenda F

By Mar 31/2020

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Excellent choice of images; together a compellingly, current story.

    Suggestions:

    While the images work together thematically, they don't quite work in tone, style and colour.  The use of some editing to give the image a similar tonal feel would make them stronger as a series.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    Nice collage, sad story, Bummer.

    Suggestions:

    It doesn't affect the story, but the window reflections could be cloned out of the sky fairly easily. 

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    The story is certainly strong.  I’m sure many can relate to the experience.  I particularly liked the composition of the upper right shot. 

    Suggestions:

    The bottom right picture has some glare on the signage and the reflection from the airport ceiling appearing above the plane is distracting.