Window

 

By Michal F

By Aug 29/2022

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    The contrast between the architecural and subject's style creates an interesting story line for the viewer. The light is mostly from the ouside edge to the center

    Suggestions:

    To maximise the directional effect of the light I would try one of two options. Use masks to darken the center mullion to match the rest of the frame; darken the doors to be closer to the walls; and lighten the tops of the windows to blow out the details there. Alternately, mask the door and lighten the shadows on the door to balance with the ceiling and the walls.
    In either case try feathering the vignette so it's less obvious.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    A moodyimage and makes use of Natural light to emphasize the feeling.  I wonder what the woman is looking at.

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    Lovely how the natural light is coming through the window and creating shadows in the room.  Great image of the woman looking out.  Well done.

  4. Comment
    Strengths:

    Absolutely terrific image! Love your treatment, the haze over the window, the mysterious figure, it all adds up to a fine art photograph!

    Suggestions:

    Print and frame it.

  5. Comment
    Strengths:

    Nice composition and good use of light, creating a nostalgic look.

  6. Comment
    Strengths:

    A composition that suggests a story.  Lovely use of the falling-off light to create a shadow frame, and a sense of intimacy around the subject.  that the light in the windows is blown out matters not at all.  We are free to fill in the scene with whatever our imaginations desire.  Wonderful detail of the textures on the walls.  A very fine image.

  7. Comment
    Strengths:

    This wonderful dramatic low key high contrast image has a wide tonal range with shadows that creatively conceal and reveal details such as  in the stone flooring and walls.  The photo has depth, and the  woman in the photo is important as it adds interest and tells a story.