A warmth of memories

 

By Judy M

By Aug 31/2022

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Nice capture of a warm sentiment.

    Suggestions:

    Try masking the memorial plaque and lightening the exposure to make the name more visible, but not too prominent.
    I'm always put off when subjects are not plumb within the frame. I would either emphasize the tilt to leave no doubt, or align the bench with the bottom of the frame

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    I can see the natural light aspect of the photo, but I am distracted by the slant of the bench and path.

    Suggestions:

    Try straightening the image in editing?

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    A well suited title for the image...I can feel the warmth. Like how the light gently cast the shadows of the vase and bench.

    Suggestions:

    It seems a bit out of focus and I would suggest to straighten the image, so the bench is leveled.

  4. Comment
    Strengths:

    Very pretty dappled light.  The shadow under the bench adds interest.  A poignant subject.

    Suggestions:

    The image appears to be tipped a bit.  If you rotate the image just a bit to make the legs of the bench vertical, the image would be much stronger.