Viewing the Horizon

 

By Judy M

By Aug 31/2022

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    Intriguing abstract shape framing the water and wave action

    Suggestions:

    Reduce the highlights a bit to hint at more of the details in the brightest areas and lighten the shadows a bit to hint at the texture and context of the framing natural arch

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    It's very dramatic! I like the jagged edges of the rock framing the ocean.

    Suggestions:

    I wanted to look around the rock to get the full effect of the sunshine on the water.  I wonder what it would look liKe if that were centred in the opening.

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    A study in the power of contrast.  The interesting framing creating an engaging shape that attracts the eye.

    Suggestions:

    The image would be 100% stronger if you have been able to have a boat or some sort of subject on the water.  While you have that great frame, the subject beyond lacks any place to rest the eye, and there is little story.

  4. Comment
    Strengths:

    Very nice outline of Africa. This is a magical place!