Brown Study

 

By Steve V

By Sep 16/2022

 

 
  1. Comment
    Strengths:

    This is a lovely interpretation of the theme.  The facial expression is relaxed and engaging.  The lovely use of warm tones and shadow emulate a painterly feel.  The close crop feels intimate. A lovely image.

    Suggestions:

    To enhance that painterly feel, consider some editing work on the complexion to give it that soft, smooth look we expect in this sort of portrait.  If you were to revisit the project, consider waredrobe to get ride of that bright line, likely a strap, across her shoulder.  It calls attention away from the face.  A small thing, but such a lovely portrait deserves attention to detail.

  2. Comment
    Strengths:

    A beautiful portrait of a peson looking up. Good use of light.

    Suggestions:

    The theme was to show a different perspective by looking up. 

  3. Comment
    Strengths:

    Very nice prtrait and certainly fits the looking up theme....literally looking up!

    Nice lighting on the face.

    Suggestions:

    I would like to see more of the face and both eyes in sharper focus.